Dear Mr.Cattanzara
Hello, it's me George, I hope you remember me. I just want to tell you about my new life in Los Angeles. I have a big house and a red Ferrari, I have a wonderful wife (I met her last year) and I work as a lawyer. Sophie moved to Denver and opened her own restaurant after she won the first prize in the lottery.
I'm adding 1,000$ to this letter to show you how much I thank you for your help ,when we were living in the same neighborhood. I read the whole fall and the whole winter after I learned my lesson from you and when the spring came I went camping In Hawaii, it's a fantastic place and I wish we had some place like that in our country.After camping in Hawaii, I understood that I had to complete my education.
When I tried to go back to school, I realized how much the reading helped me to succeed. Aftet I finished school, I went to college and I studied for five years there. As soon as I graduated with honors, I went to the "Jack's Lawyer For Graduated" office and they hired me. I worked hard but I succeeded and this made me glad.
I'm going to visit New York soon and I hope to see you.
Yours,
George Stoyonovich.
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