יום רביעי, 9 בנובמבר 2011

Does clothes influence the way we feel and behave?

Today I want(ww.-would like) to talk about how our clothes influence the way we feel and behave and how. People are juding(gr.) each other by their clothes and not by their personality and cas(ww.+sp.) of that they don't want to try to be their(whose?) friends,(Start a new sentence)so even if a person is very friendly and very funny, people might not to be he's friends.
I even think that people who don't have the right clothes might try to attracte(sp.)
 people in different ways.He might change his personality (maybe not for the better).

 I don't believe that clothes should influence the way we feel about people
because it's all self confidence(phr.)  and how we see ourselves.
Because clothes help make the first impression, maybe some people don't get the same chance to be popular . So some of the poeple won't act naturally.
 
The last point that I want to mention here is the designer clothes.
These clothes are the most expensiveness(מיותר) ,so people who wear them look the best.
And they are the most nice to see them. so people will prefer the person
who had(gr.) those clothes. I feel this should'nt be like this.For example, I don't care what
my friend wears, I care about how he's as a friend(phr.),the kind of person he's.


In conclusionclothes are an important issue for most people.
 Despite(ww.-Although) clothes can make a difference in behavior they can not change the personalty, the behavior change is a certain area and only temporary(phr.).

It's still very messy, although it's better. Your arguments and the way you explain yourself is not clear enough.
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Daphna

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