The Evil's Nature

In religious belief ,evil is usually perceived as dualistic opposite of good(phr.). However

nowadays, evil, is something that we learn from our enviroment in order

to protect ourselves from worst things - It's not clear what you mean. What you are stating here is not accurate.

The Pandora box was a large jar given to Pandora, which contained all the evils of the

world and when the jar was opened all the evils release(gr.- use the past form of the passive) to our world. This is one explanation to the source of evil . Still, I believe that we can decide how evil we want to be (or whether we want to be evil at all!!).

In my opinion , evil is like a  feeling - you can control it when you're trained enough.

However, somtimes we have to be mean to protect us(ww.) (from what?)  and to keep our

image to show that nobody can humiliate us(in which cases does that happen?) - this is too vague.

In conclusion, the evilness is hidden in every person, however, we  decide how to show

it and how to use it. All the people on Earth exposed(gr. - use the passive) to evil but we react differently because we don't think the same way. 

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Daphna
I'm sorry by the grade remains the same. You will have to try again to make it clearer

Relationships in family

One day when I'll be a father ,my child and me will have a sympathetic relationship.

He'll tell me everything and we'll be like friends ,moreover I'll let him be independent.

However, nowadays, parents have a complicated relationship with their child for several reasons,
for instance, (the) generation gap, experience and principles.

My relationship with my parents is quite good ,we don't debate or clash, but it takes alot

of energy from both of us. I got my independence without asking them (for it), they just give(gr.) it to me ,so we didn't fight over it. Also, they try to give me everything I want ,and when they don't give me what I want I try to understand why they did it. So ,first side(ww.), my parents try to understand me and respond to my needs and on the other hand, I try to stay clam when they refuse.

In my opinion, the main reason for those complicated relationships between both sides is tenacity because when one side refuses the other side gets angry and they both fight until they bleeding(ww.+gr.). The solution to this problem is very easy, to be more patient and understand each other better. Even when the problem is bigger, there are a lot of professionals that can help in this situation, from Alon Gal to workshops in this issue.

In conclusion, (a) home should be a nice place(phr.). However, it requires patience from both sides, they must try to bridge their different opinions. In order to get what they want ,they both have to understand each other and to understand that fighting  won't lead them anywhere.


Much better. Well done!
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Daphna