A Dilemma is a complicated problem, it's the kind of problem that doesn't have only one right solution. Moreover ,sometimes a dilemma doesn't have a solution at all, and you need to choose the best solution for 

 you- the one that can help you the most or the one you think is the right thing to do. Sometimes all the solutions won't be what you planned.

About two years ago, I had to choose between two classes, Nachshon or the computer class.

Nachshon is a scientific class- the subjects taught in this class are chemistry,physics and biolgy 
,unlike the computer class subjects ,which are mostly about computers and programming.

At the end, I chose the programming class becuse most of my friend went to this class too,and I wanted to

be with them.I had considered some things when I had to choose, for example: the subjects I was going to learn in 
each class,whether I like those subjects at all ,How to find new friends?
How each class was going to help me as a person. So, I chose the programming class because I thought it was better to(ww.-for) me. But I had not done this choice alone,

my family helped me.

Looking back I don't think  that my choice was the right one. Because I had gone to the class because of my

friends and after a month I moved to the  Nachshon class. When I had chosen this class I thought that it was the
 end of the world because I would be alone until I find some new friends,but I had to think differently
.I was wrong ,luckily I succeed move to the Nachshon class(phr.+gr.).

The second option was to stay at the Nachshon class from the beginning (I moved before the first day

of school).Today, when I'm in class I feel very good because I found new freinds.In conclusion, I think 

I made the right decision

Better, but still needs some work.
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Daphna

Two Little Important Things

Everybody knows the word 'succeed'(ww.-success), have you ever wondered what really made someone successful? which characteristics help us to succeed? In my opinion, there are two important characteristics that help someone to succeed. The first one is patience, when you're listening to someone, and the second characteristic is to know when you need to be convincing.

In your life, you need to hear(ww.-listen to) people's opinions(ww.-advice) and to know how to use it for you, by taking all the opinions and trying to make(ww.-get to) the best solution, with some of the opinions.Moreover, people will be glad when they  hear about your idea, because this idea help them to get what they want them ,and you care about them.

(not clear,what do you mean?). Then people try to help you, because you helped

When someone tries to make people choose him, so he could succeed in what he is planning,(New sentence)  he have(gr.) to know how to convince people, to know how to explain his idea and make it sound the best. An example for that is like in politics, where everybody trying(gr.) to convince the other people to choose him(ww.-them), and then he can make rules and agreements(phr. - not clear).

 In conclusion, the two main characteristic, in my opinion, are being convincing and listening to others' opinions ,because it is a good way to succeed. My advice to you is to try to listen to others' opinions even when you don't want to succeed, and then when you really need them they will be there for you.

It's still not very clear, although it's better.
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Daphna