In sports, like in other areas of life, everybody has two options; to be alone or to be in group.
Both options have advantages and disadvantages, so every person can choose his favorite option.
Specifically, in sports there are so many types that anyone can do what he prefers; (New sentence) in individual sports, like swimming ,golf and running, the sportsperson depends on himself, not as on team spotrs, where he dependents(ww.- depends) on other people. (New sentence) however, I prefer team sports.
In my opinion, when a person chooses the individual sports he doesn't trust people, so he wants to
be independent too(מיותר), he has to trust only in(מיותר) himself .However, individual sports is also harder than team games, because the sportsperson has to give one hundred precent to succeed and beat his opponent .Unlike the team sports, in which a sportsperson can have a bad day but still his team will win the game.
I think that chose(gr.-choosing) both(ww.-either) sports says somthing about the person. For example, when people choose the team sports that can tell us about him that he trusts other people ,he's(you are talking about "people" and then start talking about "he") friendly ,ready to share the glory. Compared to the individual sports(You can't start a sentence this way), where people are more reliant on themselves, want the glory to themselves and to know that what they gained by winning is thanks to them.
In conclusion, when (a) person make(gr.) a choice about the sport that he prefers, it tells us about the personality of that people .This is not a concluding paragraph, it's only one sentence long.
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